“In the darkness” – Nayana Nair


I see this small image of me

in my mind’s eye.

In a world filled with black fog,

there in the center stands someone.

Who feels like

my life personified.

I feel I am copy of whoever

stands in that darkness.

I feel I only exist there.

I feel I am the darkness.


  1. TheOriginalPhoenix says:

    Very well written though it’s tragic

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ I am glad you liked it. Although I didn’t want to start the year with such sad thought…but what to do..we need to embrace sadness with as much love as we have for happiness in life.

      1. I liked this poem..but it is very sad poem..I don’t really like it. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

      2. Nayana Nair says:

        He be…I am glad that you liked and didn’t like it ๐Ÿ™‚ Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

      3. TheOriginalPhoenix says:

        You’re welcome! That’s true

  2. “My life personified”…the whole thing is excellent!

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ Glad you liked it.

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