“United” -Nayana Nair


I take each step forward

thinking about the steps you took without me.

My heart has faith

in the love that it felt

and it knows not how to give up.

But the pain of your indifference and neglect

hits the shore made of pebbles and shells

we collected all our life,

for the one we shall love.

But tonight, I am leaving this shore,

venturing into waters that I do not know of,

to feel what you feel.

So we may be united in hatred,

if not in love.


  1. TheOriginalPhoenix says:

    This is so tragic but beautiful

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot ๐Ÿ™‚

      1. TheOriginalPhoenix says:

        You’re welcome!

  2. So well written but I pray that you do not fall into the well of hatred. It is a poison that can effect even your ability to write such heartfelt and in part lovely thoughts. ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      I hope so too ๐Ÿ™‚ Glad you liked the poem…thanks a lot ๐Ÿ™‚

      1. Keep in mind if he walked away from you he’s not worthy of you! Save all that love and emotion for someone who would never do that to you! ๐Ÿ™‚ โค

      2. Nayana Nair says:

        Thank you dear ๐Ÿ™‚ for these words of support. I will keep that in mind (I hope my heart listens to me too ๐Ÿ™‚ )

      3. You’re so welcomeโ€ผ๏ธโŒโญ•๏ธ

  3. Beautiful even in the sadness.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ So glad that you liked it ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. Shrushti says:

    Hey nayana! I just nominated you for the mystery blogger award! I love your blog and looking forward to catching up.. do check it out!

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks dear ๐Ÿ™‚ I appreciate it.

      1. Shrushti says:

        Of course! โค

  5. Beautifully written, so much of sadness in words

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ glad you liked it.

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