“I once wrote…” – Nayana Nair

empty_church.jpg

I once wrote a beautiful poem

which sounded like a happy child

playing in an empty church.

The echoes of his laughter and footsteps

playing in a never ending loop.

But I have never been a happy child.

I have never been to a church.

The poem was beautiful.

It was just not me.

 

20 Comments

  1. Josh says:

    You can be that happy child, find a church πŸ™‚

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      I was not a happy child, but I am happy now….books filled with beautiful words…was the church that I needed to find πŸ™‚

      1. Josh says:

        That’s Great.. The best one can get.. Books! πŸ™‚

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Glad you like it:-) thanks πŸ™‚

  2. 3rdofthe3rd says:

    A very deep statement. To be stuck in a loop doesn’t sound like a pure happiness that anyone would grow in. Be happy in the world, be sad too as the emotion we have strengthen our soul. Keep Smiling.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you…I will keep that in mind πŸ™‚

  3. TheOriginalPhoenix says:

    This is a beautiful poem

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks dear πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked the poem

      1. TheOriginalPhoenix says:

        You’re welcome!

  4. Beautiful words and imagery in your poem.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot :):):)

  5. artsycrystal says:

    Beautiful peom can’t wait to read more

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked my poem πŸ™‚

  6. Now this is wonderfully philosophical 😊

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚ I am glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  7. Idealize says:

    That’s depressing 😳

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      He he πŸ™‚ I know πŸ™‚ I tend to write depressing poems mostly 😦

      1. Idealize says:

        Oh that’s ok, you’ll surely evolve now that I am following you πŸ˜„πŸ˜‹πŸ˜Š

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