“Just Us” – Nayana Nair

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The sounds long dead and are born again
as the crack appears in time
and you walk into these arms
swallowing the sun,
swallowing the world,
leaving just us,
just me
looking at your memory passing me by.

14 Comments

  1. Bill says:

    So beautiful! Well done!

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot 😁

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Glad you liked it.☺️
      Thanks ☺️😁

  2. Sifar says:

    Beautiful! And this picture reminded me of childhood when i used to play with the dust particles highlighted by the ray of sunlight falling inside room!

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚
      (had the exact same thought when I saw that picture πŸ™‚ )

      1. Sifar says:

        Haha i can understand that! πŸ˜„ it was so engrossing that activity!! Much more than today’s video games πŸ˜ƒ

  3. This is an elegant and moving poem! Immediately puts one’s heart in tune with the feelings you portray!
    xoxo

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot πŸ™‚
      So glad you liked it πŸ™‚

  4. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come enjoy – JUST US – a poem of yearning and remembrance.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot for the reblog. πŸ™‚

      1. You are so very welcome!!!
        xoxo

  5. alienpoems says:

    Beautiful my friend!

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Glad you liked it πŸ™‚
      Thanks πŸ™‚

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