“You’d be proud of me” – Nayana Nair

Just wanted you to know

that I am doing well,

that I miss you even when I shouldn’t,

that you’d be proud of me
if you saw how good I have become
at evading love,

that I am doing all that I wanted,

that without the barriers of your love
my life stands in luminous warm sun
and in the depressing beautiful rain as well,

that I miss you
but don’t want you back yet,

that I am slowly growing into the woman
who knows how to love someone
as good and twisted as you,
though I won’t get to love you again.

12 Comments

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thank you 😊 Means a lot πŸ™‚

  1. pranabaxom says:

    So many twists and turns.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Glad you liked it 😊
      Thank you 😊

  2. -Eugenia says:

    Wow! Mind stirring piece! Brilliant writing.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Really glad you liked it 😊
      Thank you for such kind words πŸ™‚ Means a lot 😊

  3. charlypriest says:

    So youΒ΄re dumping me? Your bad then.

    Powerful writen poem.

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot 😊😁

  4. Bold and beautiful..!! Just loved it.. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜‡πŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌπŸ‘ŒπŸΌ

    1. Nayana Nair says:

      Thanks a lot πŸ™‚ Means a lot πŸ™‚

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